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Saturday 27 September 2008

Poison

sky burdened
with polluted clouds

falls

no wonder
birds struggle to nest

fail


Poison for Weekend Wordsmith.
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10 comments:

  1. Anonymous10:15 am

    so true

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  2. Scot2:42 pm

    i like the structure around the f words.

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  3. Janice Thomson2:53 pm

    Your words strike a chord Juliet and well they should considering the number of species now on the endangered lists.

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  4. polona5:58 pm

    powerful imges wit a poignant message

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  5. J.C. Montgomery9:43 pm

    Stunning. Has left me speechless.

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  6. Anonymous10:33 pm

    Brilliant!

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  7. Anonymous7:18 pm

    Very topical poem, considering how the whole world is thinking about going green. This could be the poem that speaks to the world on the subject.

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  8. Grant Hackett7:55 pm

    Hi. Found this poem through Poets Who Blog. The rhythm of the poem establishes a marvelous tension, enhancing the poem's meaning. Really nice.

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  9. Beatrice V12:52 pm

    Excellent momentum, Iam here via PWB.

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  10. Angel10:56 pm

    Very good. It makes you stop and think.

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