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Friday, 9 May 2008

haiku

mist white sky -
invisible swifts
shriek

8 comments:

  1. Wonderful! Felt like I was there, listening, soaking up the sights and sounds. Well done.

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  2. Anonymous3:14 pm

    keep head down
    shuffling
    miss beauty

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  3. :)
    There will be more sun tomorrow, we hope...

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  4. Wonderful imagery - you put us right there.

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  5. they keep hunting, regardless of the weather.... love it

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  6. Haiku I like I just can't seem to write it

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