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Sunday, 20 April 2008

haiku

chaffinches fight -
cherry blossom petals
fall

8 comments:

  1. yes--captured this with beauty

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  2. You paint a lovely picture with your words

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  3. interesting juxtaposition... says much about life cycles as well.

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  4. Marvellous haiku, Crafty and flashing as they must be: words and sounds standing out in vastness.

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  5. Anonymous10:48 pm

    I love watching chaffinches. A beautiful poem makes me think of Roath Park in Cardiff city.

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  6. I love the image this creates. Very beautiful. I've never actually seen a chaffinch, but they look pretty. :D

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  7. Anonymous8:30 am

    Thank you for your links to the pics of the birds. I am enjoying refreshing my memories of British birds. Lovely, lovely haiku.

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