Seven years old, in my jigsaw world map
I saw the west coast of Africa
fit neatly beside Brazil
despite the expanse of ocean
that correctly came between
in broken blue.
Years later in a college lecture room
I discovered continental drift,
plate tectonics, theories of biogeography
and instantly understood.
Now, sifting through photographs
I see your distant face:
Africa to my Brazil.
previously published in Curlew magazine
unneeded(?) puzzle pieces for Weekend Wordsmith
That must have been quite a moment when you understood what you already innately knew. A beautifully written piece Juliet - love that last verse.
ReplyDeleteLovely idea, perfectly executed, tying the two pieces together at the end. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteHow beautiful. How honest. How needed for the times in which we live.
ReplyDeleteGod bless.
This is beautiful. Two worlds merge together in human form...just lovely.
ReplyDeleteTracey
love this. wonderful revelation
ReplyDeletehow superb..beautiful
ReplyDeletewhat amazing imagery here... i read this the other day,, and i thought i had commented... so i am glad i was brought back by WW today... so much can be read into this...shifting, mirror images... attractions ...very insightful....
ReplyDeletelove the end--makes it real
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Ooh, wow. That is one strong poem. I remember those same lessons -- but without the realization at the end that makes this so very strong. Wow.
ReplyDeleteYup. Excellent.
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