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Sunday, 16 December 2007

haiku

pale sun -
frost glitters
on roofs


Beauty for One Deep Breath

29 comments:

  1. frost glitters... very image in 6 words. love it

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  2. Oh, yes! I see it! Beautiful!

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  3. I can see it in my mind's eye. These short haikus are so effective, CGP.

    By the way, I've tagged you!

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  4. hi there juliet. really like the haiku. you are managing to capture the season so well in so few words! wanted to let you know that i have just passed on the true blue blogging award to you.
    happy monday.

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  5. simply....beautiful those few words say it all!

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  6. Yes, yes, yes! That is wonderful.
    Writing in Faith

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  7. yes it was doing that here too this morning

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  8. Anonymous4:32 pm

    Hi crafty,
    Your haiku reminds me of the view from my window.
    I live in the back of the building so all I can see are rooftops covered with snow.
    Thanks for stopping in.

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  9. Anonymous6:15 pm

    What a wonderful representation of a wonderful season.

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  10. Perfect......one of my favourite sights, that!

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  11. the view from on high... very lovely....

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  12. beautiful beautiful beautiful!!
    So simple yet it evokes a million memories and visions... love it!

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  13. Anonymous12:17 pm

    You write simply beautiful words and are able to create such a powerful visual image.

    Tracey

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  14. Anonymous1:52 pm

    I can see it. I'll hold on to that image since we are back in Florida.

    Marcia (MeeAugraphie)

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  15. That's beautiful and the image out my window this morning.

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  16. Tweet tweet. I'm perched there.

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  17. Excellent and done so simply!

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  18. Hey Julie,

    Would have sent an email, but couldn't find an address- Thanks for your comment on my poem, I've done a rewrite and wanted to share it with you, so, if you're interested it's at:

    A CAROL FOR ANOTHER BLOODY CENTURY

    PS: I've been looking around your sites - very nice.

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  19. A totally visual piece - thank you.

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  20. the simplicity and softness reflects a beautiful winter day..

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  21. Anonymous2:11 am

    oh yeah they glitter, nicely captured.

    UL

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  22. Anonymous6:17 am

    short and lovely, I like it!!

    Sandy, from gardenpath

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  23. Frost has a way with beauty...

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  24. simple, clear, crisp & beautiful

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  25. I love seeing your poem come to life.

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