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Thursday, 30 August 2007

haiku

shaking out
a thousand uncaged eyes -
the peacock shimmers.


written in response to Invitation to Poetry: Freedom at Abbey Arts

10 comments:

  1. Anonymous3:55 pm

    That's a great description of the peacock showing his plumage. :)

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  2. 9 words

    a billion pixels of image!

    well done.

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  3. Anonymous4:40 pm

    great poem! Thanks for your contribution. You say so very much in such a small space -- very evocative!

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  4. What a wonderful image. Very well done.

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  5. Anonymous7:12 pm

    Oh, lovely! You do so much with so little. :)

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  6. This is fantastic. I always think peacocks are a little frightening, but this is explosive in all the best ways!

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  7. Juliet this is a very striking verse - the imagery is fantastic.

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  8. Hi Crafty! Fantastic image your words creates -- all those amazing eyes!!
    :)

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  9. oooh, this is nice

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