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Tuesday, 17 April 2007

haiku - energy


sun's energy
becomes nuts and fruits -
squirrel bounces.
squirrel in Royal Botanic Gardens, Edinburgh
energy for One Deep Breath

19 comments:

  1. It's so clever how you connected everything in so few words...great photo too!

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  2. Anonymous7:29 pm

    You know, I really find it fascinating that I always write similar to you for these prompts. LOL

    Love the picture, and the haiku really does bounce. :)

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  3. energetic photo and haiku! :)

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  4. I think I too will give it a try. Your haiku has a very eternal feel to it.

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  5. Anonymous5:03 pm

    This made me smile! The last line is so great.

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  6. an excellent take on the subject

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  7. Perfect, I like how everything worked together. The photo was fun!

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  8. Thanks! The picture and haiku energized me on a very slow going day. :-)

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  9. How cute and your haiku was filled with delightful energy!

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  10. Susan, Polona, Brian, quietpaths, mandy, wrdmuser, tammy - thanks.

    Gautami - eternal? Wow, thanks.

    Roswila - glad it helped energise you!

    And the photo was a total fluke, the squirrel was running around me in circles and I had no idea any of the photos would come out!

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  11. Anonymous7:47 pm

    Now that makes for a good energy source!
    Your poem makes me think of spring.

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  12. I love the connection you made throughout. There's a lesson there. Don't you just love when we take those fluke photos that are just great.

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  13. A squirrel does seem like pure energie, doesn't it? If you ever see Over the Hedge, the squirrel is super-sonic.

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  14. I loved this- squirrels just epitomize energy to me!

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  15. Love this! We have a squirrel in outr backyard. Too quick to get.

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  16. Why he's kicking up his heels! When I read a haiku like this I am humbled. The condensation of meaning and form is beyond me. I love it - and it is beyond me.

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  17. Anonymous8:48 pm

    Gorgeous photo and a very energetic haiku, I like it.

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  18. Juliet,
    The picture of an energized squirrel and the mental image of the suns energy be converted to fruits and nuts is beautiful.
    rel

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  19. Anonymous7:01 am

    hi i love it

    do you have any sugesston for me how to write a haiku poem coz ihave project about haiku and energy

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