Your lovely haiku seems to me like a welcome to fall, with the bird singing in the last moments of summer. But that's just my interpretation - and haiku has so many layers of meanings and interpretations. Well done, you!
It would seem that I'm not the only one looking out the window at the onset of fall. Our Northeastern US fall is beginning very quickly--a rapid change from summer--and I think that it's got most people either grumpy or introspective. You poem is lovely and I'm not just saying that because it reminds me of mine.
solitude and autumn are like hand in glove: it is a great time of year for reflection. 'one bird sings' is a wonderful line, it makes a good title for a larger piece of work, a book or painting. excellent haiku!
Your lovely haiku seems to me like a welcome to fall, with the bird singing in the last moments of summer. But that's just my interpretation - and haiku has so many layers of meanings and interpretations. Well done, you!
ReplyDeleteso beautiful, I really love this
ReplyDeleteWonderful, wonderful. I love this.
ReplyDeleteIt would seem that I'm not the only one looking out the window at the onset of fall. Our Northeastern US fall is beginning very quickly--a rapid change from summer--and I think that it's got most people either grumpy or introspective. You poem is lovely and I'm not just saying that because it reminds me of mine.
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku reminding me of fall and soon my hummingbirds will be gone. Nice job!
ReplyDeletesolitude and autumn are like hand in glove: it is a great time of year for reflection. 'one bird sings' is a wonderful line, it makes a good title for a larger piece of work, a book or painting. excellent haiku!
ReplyDeleteLovely haiku, with just the right touch of melancholy that seems to go hand in hand with autumn.
ReplyDeleteI love the autumn (or 'fall'), so I love this. The last line is my favourite - I can hear that one bird singing now.
ReplyDeletebeautifully stated
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone for your comments! The bird is the European robin, which has a wonderful wistful song in autumn.
ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely haiku. The third line leaves such anticipation... thanks for the beautiful words! :)
ReplyDeleteHaiku don't usually move me, this one does, my favorite.
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