Tuesday, 6 October 2009

morning light -
last night's seal becomes
a buoy





previously published in Blithe Spirit, the journal of the British Haiku Society

14 comments:

Titus said...

Wonderful.

Billy said...

As lovely as always!

Jasmine said...

Clever words. I used to follow a band called Blyth Spirit. Many years ago :)

fourwindshaiga said...

I love these pared down poems.
Nice job, Juliet.

Michelle Johnson said...

i can see why it was published. it's a great haiku. have a wonderful night.

BlueJayEye said...

I love it!

Janice Thomson said...

What a neat aha! moment Juliet.

steven said...

hi juliet, harsh sweet words. steven

Oh said...

best one ever.
You have to do somethng special with this one - put it on a card, take a picture of it...something. Love it.

Tumblewords: said...

Great haiku!

MyMaracas said...

Love it! There's a whole story packed into just a few words.

Rabbits' Guy said...

Heh Heh ... I've been there!

Annie said...

Gorgeous

jem said...

Good one. I love the tricks that night plays, it offers a flip-side to every image. Double the fun!