Monday, 17 October 2005

Harvest Moon

Never has the moon looked more yellow than in the last couple of days, particularly tonight. This haiku is perhaps a shorthand for the beginning of a longer poem:

Glowing yellow disk
rising from a bank of cloud
harvest moon teasing

2 comments:

David E. Patton said...

I like this poem as is
David

Crafty Green Poet said...

Thanks! I also like the poem as it is, but I think there is also a longer poem there too. I'll just have to see what happens!