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Wednesday, 12 October 2022

Autumn Haiku

autumn sunshine –
the robin’s song
changes key

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previously published (with a commentary from the editor) on Haiku Seeds in this post

3 comments:

  1. I like it. Does the robin actually change it's song as winter approaches? I recently wrote a poem about the goldfinches that populate my hay fields in the summer... they are so brilliant, but molt and put on a brown suit before flying south.

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  2. A lovely Autumn Haiku.

    Enjoy your week.

    All the best Jan

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  3. Hi Jeff, yes the European robin sings a different song in autumn and winter. Males and females both have territories in winter and they sing all year, a different song to the male's summer song. Your poem sounds interesting too, the US goldfinches are very different in appearance to ours.

    Thanks Jan

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