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Tuesday, 31 January 2017

haiku

clouds gather
carrion crows fight
in the tree tops

5 comments:

  1. Mmm, I love the imagery of this haiku. Crows gathering are somewhat similar to clouds gathering, perhaps storm clouds!

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  2. Hi Marcie, yes there's a storm on the horizon....

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  3. Anonymous11:47 pm

    sums up the situation in the world today :(

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  4. __Seems there are many crow-ku of late, and yours Juliet is one of the best. If there is more than one crow, there always seems to be a "tussle" between or among them.
    __ This, a sight many of us may have seen, and I just envisioned the ice; slip-slide-in away. Smiles_!

    two crows
    play carrion tug-rope
    icy roadway

    _m

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  5. I like this, the words are perfect.

    All the best Jan

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