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Friday, 9 January 2015

haiku

dusk -
under the streetlights
a robin sings

3 comments:

  1. dusk
    under the blankets
    maureen coughs

    (sorry -had to do it! ;)

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  2. Maybe because it's set in dusk, there's a feeling of bittersweet farewell to this haiku.

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  3. I love this. It catches an aspect of urban experience that is often overlooked.

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