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Tuesday, 15 January 2013

winter haiku

fresh snow -
two magpies bicker
in a silver birch.

10 comments:

  1. I love this. Lovely mental image it gave me :)

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  2. A brilliant image - we don't get magpie's on Islay but your haiku makes me see them. Thanks

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  3. Oh yes, Juliet, magpies are really good at bickering.

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  4. nice alliterative read


    much love...

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  5. Great precision - it rings so true!

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  6. No snow on my part of the world today, but I love the shining image in this poem.

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  7. Ha! I can picture the magpies bickering. Lovely haiku!

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  8. Great one. Showing the strength that careful word choice can achieve. Love 'bicker' - such a brittle winter sound.

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