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Monday, 30 April 2012

Cherry Blossom Haiku

waiting for swifts
the grey sky dances
with blossom petals

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dusk
a young rabbit eats
fallen blossoms

10 comments:

  1. Anonymous9:46 pm

    Definitely spring haiku!

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  2. walking stick
    as I gaze across this glen
    a goldfinch

    And the young rabbit watches; a fine pair, Juliet!

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  3. Very nice!

    We have cherry blossoms too .. lots!

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  4. I like the idea that the sky is waiting for the swifts.

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  5. We've just got swifts!

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  6. You've painted images in my mind...spring in all its loveliness.

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  7. cherry blossom fall
    petal by petal -
    TV viewing

    much love...

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  8. Your haiku both are lovely, but the second is an occasion for a real smile. I didn't know until yesterday that our state flower, the bluebonnet, is known in Spanish as conejo. The word means "rabbit", and was used to describe the bluebonnet because the top of the blossoms look like a rabbit's tail!

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