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Saturday, 10 March 2012

spring haiku

dew covered fields -
a stoat in ermine
bounces past


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putting words
to the chaffinch's song -
ginger beer


the second of these was previously published in Blithe Spirit, the journal of the British Haiku Society

10 comments:

  1. Anonymous5:23 pm

    Very springy!
    The second made me smile.

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  2. A stoat in ermine/ How grand! :)

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  3. Thanks Sandy!

    It was wonderful, indeed, Jinksy and quite a surprise!

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  4. I love your spring haikus.

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  5. I'm always learning something here. I never had heard of a "stoat". Now I know a good bit about them - cute, but rather effective in bringing dinner home, too!

    Lovely haiku!

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  6. Hi Juliet,

    Beautiful... I love these haiku's and can visualize your fabulous Spring days.

    Happy new week
    Hugs
    Carolyn

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  7. Very Spring Haiku. Nice post Thanks for sharing.

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  8. Hi there - thanks for the visit to my 'wordy blog' - glad you liked it.

    The last poem is splendid - the rhythms of bird song are always fun to play with.

    Stewart M - Australia

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  9. Wonderful words evoke spring so well. Thank you.

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  10. A couple of dandies.

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