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Saturday, 24 September 2011

haiku

pink clouds
above the city rooftops -
a skein of geese

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drizzle -
two kestrels
hover

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6 comments:

  1. "skein of geese" lovely!

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  2. Juliet, what is the structure of haiku considered to be in Scotland? I was taught 5-7-5 syllables per line . . . I think you have a different structure. I'm curious.
    -- Hope all is well with you.

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  3. I love these - intensely evocative, both.

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  4. Two good ones, Juliet.

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  5. Anonymous2:52 pm

    love the image of a "skein of geese"

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