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Tuesday, 6 September 2011

haiku

grey skies -
herring gulls brace their wings
against the wind

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stubbled fields -
afock of woodpigeons
takes flight

4 comments:

  1. Nicely observed, Juliet.

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  2. The second one carries a vivid image for me, though both are well formed.

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  3. Both wonderful but I particularly liked the image of gulls bracing their wings against the wind@

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  4. Its very well formed! Thanks for sharing.

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