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Monday 25 July 2011

haiku

the scent of lime trees -
a baby wren emerges
from the undergrowth

6 comments:

  1. Anonymous9:16 pm

    Two pleasures!

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  2. Wrens are so tiny - a baby one must be minute! ♥

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  3. Oh so lovely. One of my unaccomplished goals is to write a beautiful haiku. (So many things to do, so many places to go.....

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  4. Anonymous2:53 am

    Lovely - sights and smells painting a picture :)

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  5. This haiku has texture. The use of chosen words reveals its meaning. Thanks.

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