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Friday 10 September 2010

haiku

rusty gate -
a spider weaves a web
between the bars


previously published in a British Haiku Society Member Anthology

12 comments:

  1. One of the best things about this time of the year Juliet is the spiders' webs.

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  2. Dew brings a sparkle
    To the fine intricacy
    Of a spider web.

    (Did I tell you I LOVED haiku?)

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  3. Funny how I love spider webs outside, but the ones in the house drive me crazy.
    love your haiku
    thanks for sharing
    martine

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  4. love spider webs and their intricacies. nicely written haiku. happy weekend~

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  5. I missed the broccoli post until today - but the key to the stems is to peal them as you would carrots. After pealed you'll find that the are much better. The are sweeter than the tops. I like mine steamed with lemon and dill or stir-fried with water chestnuts and roasted garlic.

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  6. I always like your haiku, this is one of my favourites I think! The essence of this time of year captured in so few, well chosen words :)

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  7. Lovely image - decorating of a rusty gate!

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  8. A wonderful autumn haiku Juliet - simple yet the image is fantastic.

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  9. Hi, CG - Just dropping by to say hi and glean a little inspiration as well. Still trying poetry, I am, and playing wtih the idea of a "self made"chapbook. Love that you've done it, and btw, I remember this haiku and do so enjoy it.!
    Happy end-of-summer!

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  10. I've enjoyed browsing through your blog and now your haiku which creates a wonderful picture in my minds eye.

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