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How beautiful."shiver" a really inspired word-choice.
Nice.
good pond kumuch lovegillena
The image is perfect.
Such a lovely haiku that it made me shiver. Great work.
Love your word choice here - "skaters" and "shiver" work so well :) what an image!
fish shiver is a great ending to this wonderful haiku. i love the new blog look and that header photo is spectacular. hope all is well.
what a haiku to read in this summer's heat!Good one, Juliet...a little shiver reading it! :)wishes, devika
Nice. I like the link to tradition and Basho's pond haiku "Frog leaps".
Lovely! Thanks for sharing.
So simple seeming - so hard to do!
Gosh do I ever like this one Juliet.Excellent choice of words.
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How beautiful.
ReplyDelete"shiver" a really inspired word-choice.
Nice.
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gillena
The image is perfect.
ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely haiku that it made me shiver. Great work.
ReplyDeleteLove your word choice here - "skaters" and "shiver" work so well :) what an image!
ReplyDeletefish shiver is a great ending to this wonderful haiku. i love the new blog look and that header photo is spectacular. hope all is well.
ReplyDeletewhat a haiku to read in this summer's heat!
ReplyDeleteGood one, Juliet...a little shiver reading it! :)
wishes,
devika
Nice. I like the link to tradition and Basho's pond haiku "Frog leaps".
ReplyDeleteLovely! Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteSo simple seeming - so hard to do!
ReplyDeleteGosh do I ever like this one Juliet.
ReplyDeleteExcellent choice of words.