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Tuesday, 6 October 2009

haiku

morning light -
last night's seal becomes
a buoy





previously published in Blithe Spirit, the journal of the British Haiku Society

14 comments:

  1. As lovely as always!

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  2. Clever words. I used to follow a band called Blyth Spirit. Many years ago :)

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  3. Anonymous10:06 pm

    I love these pared down poems.
    Nice job, Juliet.

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  4. i can see why it was published. it's a great haiku. have a wonderful night.

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  5. What a neat aha! moment Juliet.

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  6. hi juliet, harsh sweet words. steven

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  7. best one ever.
    You have to do somethng special with this one - put it on a card, take a picture of it...something. Love it.

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  8. Love it! There's a whole story packed into just a few words.

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  9. Heh Heh ... I've been there!

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  10. Good one. I love the tricks that night plays, it offers a flip-side to every image. Double the fun!

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