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I've been intrigued by the different reactions that clouds and trees have to the wind also. Same force, such different attitudes that meet it!
"trees thrash" - it does suggest so well the sound the trees make "in high winds"...
Nice one, CGP :-)pour could be next!?wishesdevika
ah, the indifferent clouds :)good one
Great contrast Juliet. We had trees coming down with the winds the past few days too.
Great rhythm! That's what I love about haiku in general. Yours is done perfectly.
windy here too and the fires... the fires... southern california is on fire this week!
Our clouds are low, and dark, and lumpy. They race by ....
brilliant contrast. :)
Great contrasts here - a real sense of the difference that level makes.
I really liked this. Short and to the point.
Love how your trees provide the sound orchestration and the clouds provide visual silence on the move! Powerful!
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I've been intrigued by the different reactions that clouds and trees have to the wind also. Same force, such different attitudes that meet it!
ReplyDelete"trees thrash" - it does suggest so well the sound the trees make "in high winds"...
ReplyDeleteNice one, CGP :-)
ReplyDeletepour could be next!?
wishes
devika
ah, the indifferent clouds :)
ReplyDeletegood one
Great contrast Juliet. We had trees coming down with the winds the past few days too.
ReplyDeleteGreat rhythm! That's what I love about haiku in general. Yours is done perfectly.
ReplyDeletewindy here too and the fires... the fires... southern california is on fire this week!
ReplyDeleteOur clouds are low, and dark, and lumpy. They race by ....
ReplyDeletebrilliant contrast. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat contrasts here - a real sense of the difference that level makes.
ReplyDeleteI really liked this. Short and to the point.
ReplyDeleteLove how your trees provide the sound orchestration and the clouds provide visual silence on the move! Powerful!
ReplyDelete