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Tuesday, 29 July 2008

Evening Rain

A brief heavy downpour
-almost tropical-
stops
.......................................suddenly

dark clouds lift
a pale rainbow

swifts
dance across the sky

chimney pots
glow with evening

distant thunder
later becomes a storm
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13 comments:

  1. Anonymous11:12 pm

    I like storms, do you? Love your description of a fast moving one.

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  2. Jenn:11:13 pm

    Beautiful poem. I love tropical type storms. Sorry if you are still getting rain and clouds this summer.

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  3. Anonymous12:58 am

    I believe that one is my favorite so far.

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  4. Anonymous11:32 am

    The sudden summer storm is one of my favorite things in the whole world. You really capture it here. I like the layout of lines too.

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  5. Scot11:32 am

    me too--one of my favorites so far

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  6. d. moll, l.ac.2:45 pm

    Like it alot, rain and rain again, but different....

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  7. magiceye4:33 pm

    loved the build up to the storm!

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  8. polona6:22 pm

    great.
    this creates such vivid images...
    i enjoy summer storms provided i'm somewhere safe :)

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  9. Pamela Terry and Edward6:30 pm

    Thanks so much for stopping by our place! You have a lovely spot here, and Edward and I shall return!

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  10. RG5:08 am

    I could just see it and feel it!

    No such storms here .. just the Pacific NW drizzles!

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  11. Cynthia11:45 am

    this is quite lovely

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  12. anthonynorth10:59 am

    People are drawn to storms. So awesome, powerful, beautiful.
    Most things that are beautiful are dangerous, I find.

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  13. Mistlethrush7:56 pm

    Enjoyed the images and the lines: dark clouds lift / a pale rainbow

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