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Wednesday 18 June 2008

haiku - rabbits

tall damp grass -
rabbits leap from rock to rock
on the hillside

5 comments:

  1. Anonymous12:44 pm

    Very nice -- you capture movement and detail, it's like a short film.

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  2. wow, a whole lot of information in three lines. excellent.

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  3. What lovely imagery - one can just picture them popping out of the tall grass. Great layers here.

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  4. Anonymous10:44 pm

    This paints a nice picture. I don't often see rabbits here where I live in Maine, but had tons on the farm in Oklahoma.

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  5. Anonymous1:29 pm

    Ooh! I see them jumping!

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