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Friday, 16 May 2008

haiku - warning

storm dark skies -
a raven's loud croak
from the tower.


warning for Mad Kane's Haiku Prompt. Inspired partly by Mad's own haiku and partly by the ravens at the Kitchener Memorial in Orkney

12 comments:

  1. Anonymous8:11 am

    Very spooky! I like it. Thanks for participating in another of my prompts!

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  2. Anonymous10:34 am

    Oh I like this! Ravens and crows are great birds aren't they?

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  3. Thnks for your kindly comment!
    I'm very happy to meet someone not italian, and someone who loves poetry,it's not very easy in this time.
    I?m poet too, since I was young and I'd also like write little haiku.
    My english it's not very perfect but I'll try to reading and understand what you post on your blog, I like it soo much
    Finally a place where find serenity with poetry.
    See you soon
    kiss

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  4. ps: a left a comment on my blog too
    bye

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  5. like-this-one a lot! in love with
    the atmosphere of ravens and towers -yes.

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  6. great stark image!

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  7. I love this - it reminds of the crow who announces my presence every single time I go to the forest - you'd think he'd know me by now :)

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  8. Ooh, I hope we don't hear a knocking at the chamber door.

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  9. Quite efficiently gothic!

    Inner warning

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  10. Janice - I like the idea of you being announced by the same raven every time

    mad, scot, cynthia, polona, iself - thanks

    noah - there's a knocking at the door just now...

    mistral - thanks! It's interesting that you write haiku too - I've never read haiku in Italian!

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  11. Lovely dark gothic atmosphere.

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  12. Birds--ever the harbingers or catastrophe. Good work.

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