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Saturday, 29 March 2008

Haiku

dolphins swim
in pristine fish-rich seas -
oil reserves below.

10 comments:

  1. what an idyllic image... with ominous prospect!

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  2. "What polona said," as the saying goes. Excellent!

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  3. A scary thought Juliet when one considers how many animals are affected by oil spills. Loved the contrast in this haiku.

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  4. Anonymous12:48 am

    Scary thought. Hits out...

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  5. Me and Haiku in 7 words or less ..

    "Like to read it, can't write it"

    Nice job.

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  6. And I would continue:

    And all the same they will keep swimming
    as long as they can,
    that's the law.

    Best,
    Davide

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  7. Anonymous1:47 am

    If only all marine life could swim untroubled, unfettered. Excellent haiku.

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  8. i love dolphins!

    may these dolphins live in safety!

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  9. I like..very much..wonderful image evoked for me.

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