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Monday, 14 January 2008

haiku - rain

one collared dove
on tv aerial -
rain-clouds pass

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constant drizzle -
bracket fungi pattern
dying trees

previously published in Haiku Scotland

5 comments:

  1. Such atmosphere in so few words.

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  2. A very apt poem for today, it is raining buckets at the moment along with gale force winds. Not a good day to be outside but a perfect one for a little blogging here and there. x

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  3. Anonymous11:29 am

    Have you written poetry since you were a child? You just do it so well. So lovely!

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  4. mm - thanks,

    thisismypatch - you've got the rain too then!

    Selma - Thanks. I wrote my first poem when I was 9 I think but I didn't write much when I was a child

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  5. Anonymous12:33 am

    Lovely!

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