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Thursday, 8 November 2007

haiku

red sun rises
above misty fields -
robin sings

8 comments:

  1. Nice. I like the way the sun and the robin echo each other.

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  2. thanks jem, that's how I thought of it as I wrote it!

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  3. Anonymous6:07 pm

    event horizon
    trees waver and sway
    close to touch

    Not as good as your's Crafty.

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  4. Sweet short and serene

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  5. Anonymous12:48 pm

    I love it when you haiku.
    Gorgeous imagery!

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  6. Yes, I like the link between sun and robin too.

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  7. very beautiful. I miss robins singing, have to wait for spring though

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  8. starting to take on that cold wintery feel to the weather over there. In contrast we are havinga very hot weekeknd - 37C !

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