For a seven year old, California was a real adventure
Seeing the Half Dome in Yosemite Park made the sore legs worthwhile
Chipmunks darted to my hands to eat the nuts we had brought to Muir Woods
Walking down hot hot sand to the joy of cold water at Lake Tahoe
Dusk, hummingbirds hovering on feeders in a suburban garden
Because I'm British, on my Alter Ego blog, My Sentences are Not American
American Sentences for Read Write Poem
I tagged you in a meme on my blog... don't hate me lol! :)
ReplyDeleteah, that's northern california for you. so many opportunities for adventure. thanks for the reminder! =)
ReplyDeleteBritish or American, I really like the lines!
ReplyDeleteAh, this is superb, I couldnt help but smile at the last line coming from a Scot. Maybe you are not a Scot but just living in Edinburgh?...a good friend of mine, a Scotsman, always referred to Scotland instead of Britain. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Abzdragon, I like being tagged!
ReplyDeleteOdessa - so many indeed!
Gautami - thanks!
Ul - no I'm English, I refer to Scotland rather than Britain but I would never call myself Scottish
You created some great images with very few words! Like them!
ReplyDeleteI like how your American Sentences formed a longer poetic theme. It's a nice way to record a trip, or an outing.
ReplyDeleteMaybe you could call them Anglo Sentences. :)
Great way to record memories.
ReplyDeleteThese were very fun. I love the very american setting!
ReplyDeleteSo American it makes one want to take a vacation out there!
ReplyDeleteBritish, yet with a beautiful reminder of how diverse the landscape in in the us. (so much for a 17 syllable comment!)
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