These hills are timeless;
they have been our landmarks
five lifetimes through.
I have watched them change
from backdrop to a Roman fort
to the rarely seen, dull wilderness,
smog hidden, on the edge of town.
They and you are constants, part
of me, my body’s slow sure compass,
the only given points
on the maps of all my lives.
I never understood life’s meaning
to be eternal death,
I long for future lives,
the excitement of love’s progress.
But as I watch your spirit pass
from this world to the next,
lungs battered by the blood
of our beloved hills,
And as I watch them dig your grave
on our hilltop’s blackened stump,
I hold your hand and quietly pray:
let the next life be Nirvana.
(Previously published in Smallfry)
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Wow...I love this poem:
ReplyDeleteBut as I watch your spirit pass
from this world to the next,
lungs battered by the blood
of our beloved hills,
Yes. simply beautiful
how wonderful and poignant!
ReplyDeleteI loved the many layers in this poem! Interesting how the mountains where you are inspire very different thoughts/poetry than the mountains where I am (Canadian west coast).
ReplyDeleteI haven't visited your blog in awhile (or anyone else's). Lots of good stuff!
"The excitement of love's progress." Great line.
ReplyDeleteThe last stanza, however, conveys it all. Perfect finish.
This is amazing. I wish I could write as well.
ReplyDeleteMy dear friend passed away two weeks ago from breast cancer. Her suffering was immense. I prayed that her next life would be Nirvana. Thank you for this.
ReplyDeletelovely words...you have crafted it beautifully!
ReplyDeletewhat a really very special and beautiful poem, gave me little shivers..
ReplyDeleteSo many of life's 'landmarks' are the passing of others, they often outweigh happier events. If Nirvana is the reward, it kind of justifies some of the sadness
ReplyDeleteDeeply spiritual.
ReplyDeleteLoved it.
Excellent as always. Your poems are so very deep.
ReplyDeleteI like it too. Haunting.
ReplyDeletethat was perfection... it reminded me of some ancient indian burial rights... very full of intricacy and meaning....
ReplyDeleteSuperb work! It has a prayerful, spiritual, pleading sound that probably speaks to our 'each' day events. Absolutely superb!
ReplyDeleteloved this piece of yours...such a different voice, yet such a strong one
ReplyDeleteAnd every life has a different voice too - I guess!
ReplyDeleteLovely.
ReplyDelete"let the next life be Nirvana."
ReplyDeletesuch a heartbreaking line!
Really loved the last line. This poem was very well done.
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