Imprinted at birth by a human,
you never learnt to be what you are.
Flightless and petted, you enjoy comforts
of home and hearth,
insulated from the harsh
rules of nature that made you.
Winter air fills with honking
geese in joyful formation
high in unthinkable sky.
You look up, an ache in your bird’s brain
before waddling indoors
to be hand fed choice grain.
Later you puzzle over dreams
of endless blue and the steady beat of wings.
Previously published in Raindog.
i often wonder what animals feel (i'm convinced they do)...
ReplyDeleteand this is one great possible answer
I guess the will towards freedom is as universal as can be. Very interesting writing!
ReplyDeleteTruly imaginative, Juliet.
ReplyDeleteVery touching Juliet. It reminds me of Angelou's 'I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings' - I think having caged animals or wild animal of any kind for pets is so very wrong.
ReplyDeleteI agree with polona. And add that this is a touching poem wound with great mastery of the craft.
ReplyDeleteThis is such a coincidence: I began reading The Geese of Beaver Bog this weekend because of the pair of geese that are nesting in my beaver bogs every spring lately. And here you are, writing about my honkers. It is very poignant.
ReplyDelete'unthinkable sky' is wonderful! A great poem, Juliet.
ReplyDeleteUnthinkable sky. A thought becomes a poem right there,
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed this poem.
ReplyDelete'an ache in you bird brain' is a beautiful phrase..
ReplyDeleteit certainly is a ponderment isn't it?? what do they think when they see or hear their brethren in freedom??? are they aware??? i wonder,,,,,,
ReplyDeleteOne of my favorites, Crafty! The final two lines send me flying off in search of the rest of the flock...!
ReplyDeleteThis is very touching and leaves you with that sense of remorse and wonder.
ReplyDeletePenelope Anne
http://wannabeawritersomeday.blogspot.com/2008/01/top-poem-what-do-you-hear.html
Such empathy in this
ReplyDeleteLater you puzzle over dreams
of endless blue and the steady beat of wings.
heartbreakingly beautiful
And this poem can speak for all creatures, too.
ReplyDeleteYou captured the feeling perfectly! Especially with your last two lines. Stunning!
ReplyDeletebzobyaefYou captured the feeling perfectly! Especially with your last two lines. Stunning!
ReplyDeleteVery good work! Warm, feathery; red-brown comfort of the hearth, cold blue breath of birdy yearning; romantic, I sez.
ReplyDeleteNice one.
Ah, the trade-offs we wild animals must make for comfort, for affection and security...
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