tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post6936869160340220938..comments2024-03-28T10:05:36.756+00:00Comments on Crafty Green Poet: TriptychCrafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-50207608529908359362008-03-25T21:54:00.000+00:002008-03-25T21:54:00.000+00:00Surreal can often be straight-forward - too straig...Surreal can often be straight-forward - too straight-forward for us to understand, me thinks.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-15032518890885997452008-03-23T05:27:00.000+00:002008-03-23T05:27:00.000+00:00this is a simply lovely poignant poem...so evocati...this is a simply lovely poignant poem...so evocative...<BR/><BR/>I am a bit too busy with my work now, which will continue, so couldn't visit your blog for sometime...anyway, I will check your other posts later whenever I will get the break.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-78007480074425931812008-03-22T02:32:00.000+00:002008-03-22T02:32:00.000+00:00great poem and such a great vision of disaster i c...great poem and such a great vision of disaster i can only hope this poem will only be sureall and not our futureYours truly Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03090638684052626414noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-38677625652723069212008-03-21T17:42:00.000+00:002008-03-21T17:42:00.000+00:00As I was saying, this is very well done. Your ima...As I was saying, this is very well done. Your images are very disturbing until the "golden butterfly. You have such a hopeful heart.<BR/><BR/>-bdCassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-9556146929206044882008-03-21T17:38:00.000+00:002008-03-21T17:38:00.000+00:00This comment has been removed by the author.Cassiopeia Riseshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625091389788114012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-11563881316376410622008-03-20T20:23:00.000+00:002008-03-20T20:23:00.000+00:00I really like this one because it's surreal but it...I really like this one because it's surreal but it also makes sense! And that ending...perfection!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-67360803542729712482008-03-20T19:01:00.000+00:002008-03-20T19:01:00.000+00:00Nice poem, Crafty. I"m not totally sure what make...Nice poem, Crafty. I"m not totally sure what makes surreal surreal, but you've written a very clear set of pictures.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-26585034228666292402008-03-20T17:59:00.000+00:002008-03-20T17:59:00.000+00:00i absolutely loved this poem, so very creative, so...i absolutely loved this poem, so very creative, so very fantasy-like, so very magical! <BR/><BR/>excellent...rebeccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18248554235709475320noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-26010869312578097282008-03-20T17:36:00.000+00:002008-03-20T17:36:00.000+00:00How wonderful that a golden butterfly emerges...ce...How wonderful that a golden butterfly emerges...certainly far more than we deserve! Great piece!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-10113910049942014762008-03-20T17:04:00.000+00:002008-03-20T17:04:00.000+00:00a disturbing vision of reality.hope in the end? i ...a disturbing vision of reality.<BR/>hope in the end? i wonder...<BR/>excellentpolonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-54618468094419584182008-03-20T14:02:00.000+00:002008-03-20T14:02:00.000+00:00Very strong images of destruction. I like it a lot...Very strong images of destruction. I like it a lot!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-42288667584415732562008-03-20T11:45:00.000+00:002008-03-20T11:45:00.000+00:00thanks dick but its now published here so might no...thanks dick but its now published here so might not be accepted elsewhere... and surrealism is to an extent in the eye of the beholder, I wanted something that might appear surreal but isn't so you're right, its not<BR/><BR/>Paisley - the painting only exists in my mind...<BR/><BR/>sweet talking guy - yes a sort of ressurection at the endCrafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-87674167769356277262008-03-20T11:42:00.000+00:002008-03-20T11:42:00.000+00:00now all i need is the painting it is interpreting....now all i need is the painting it is interpreting... and i am all set... you definitely captured the very core of surrealism with this....paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-68747647999472887312008-03-20T11:23:00.000+00:002008-03-20T11:23:00.000+00:00I like the golden butterfly image - a sort of ress...I like the golden butterfly image - a sort of ressurection?Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-64144160645218007632008-03-20T10:42:00.000+00:002008-03-20T10:42:00.000+00:00I don't see surrealism here. This poem reads like ...I don't see surrealism here. This poem reads like an effective piece of verse polemic and well worth winging off to one of the environmental activist magazines.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-77436953794490017392008-03-20T08:43:00.000+00:002008-03-20T08:43:00.000+00:00rethabile, selma - thanks, that's what I intended...rethabile, selma - thanks, that's what I intended. <BR/><BR/>ul - yes its the truth! thanks<BR/><BR/>crimsonflaw, janice, billy - thanks<BR/><BR/>noah - yes I did want there to be hope at the end too...<BR/><BR/>rabbits guy - and the bunnies, yes! <BR/><BR/>stan - good question...Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-5098392540994717252008-03-20T08:38:00.000+00:002008-03-20T08:38:00.000+00:00A post-apocalyptic vision? Or just pay-back?A post-apocalyptic vision? Or just pay-back?Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-29696460700609567322008-03-20T04:22:00.000+00:002008-03-20T04:22:00.000+00:00God bless the butterflies ....(and bunnies)God bless the butterflies ....<BR/><BR/>(and bunnies)RGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02017190779860810318noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-16037981217733186442008-03-20T01:02:00.000+00:002008-03-20T01:02:00.000+00:00In the darkness we find the brightest light.This i...In the darkness we find the brightest light.<BR/><BR/>This is beautiful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-11122650429983164912008-03-19T17:32:00.000+00:002008-03-19T17:32:00.000+00:00A wonderful study in contrast, apocalyptic in sent...A wonderful study in contrast, apocalyptic in sentiment. Very well done.WHhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14815646433314236886noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-72845310454626936592008-03-19T16:03:00.000+00:002008-03-19T16:03:00.000+00:00The second stanza is breath taking. they say magic...The second stanza is breath taking. they say magic is based on potent contrast of images.crimsonflawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16846132238371790709noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-65529013010638731842008-03-19T14:58:00.000+00:002008-03-19T14:58:00.000+00:00Enjoyed the contrasting ideas and as already menti...Enjoyed the contrasting ideas and as already mentioned feel this carries a touch of realism too. Definitely makes one think. Good one Juliet.Janice Thomsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-62546491502724385472008-03-19T14:30:00.000+00:002008-03-19T14:30:00.000+00:00as surreal as it seems, it is the truth isnt it?. ...as surreal as it seems, it is the truth isnt it?. Very nicely done.ULhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15005895432233940416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-83365640251193531072008-03-19T13:12:00.000+00:002008-03-19T13:12:00.000+00:00I agree. Perhaps it's not that surreal at all. Lov...I agree. Perhaps it's not that surreal at all. Lovely piece.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-85166347641418172442008-03-19T09:38:00.000+00:002008-03-19T09:38:00.000+00:00This sounds like what the world might be if we con...This sounds like what the world might be if we continue to mess up. Very nice.Rethabilehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03523368313680103826noreply@blogger.com