tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post5668058615652015913..comments2024-03-28T10:05:36.756+00:00Comments on Crafty Green Poet: Mother of Pearl CloudsCrafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comBlogger25125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-42673664733683214752008-02-27T11:40:00.000+00:002008-02-27T11:40:00.000+00:00Watermaid - I think Mslexia is excellent in terms ...Watermaid - I think Mslexia is excellent in terms of the writing advice it gives and its articles but its selection of creative writing isn't as good as Acumen you're right. This poem was in Acumen a long time ago....Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-7943913304049093342008-02-27T11:36:00.000+00:002008-02-27T11:36:00.000+00:00This is beautiful. I love the mother of pearl imag...This is beautiful. I love the mother of pearl imagery. Would that we kept our childlike eyes. I subscribe to Acumen, which is my favourite publication. I prefer their selections to either Mslexia or The New Writer.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-63363425969882258102008-02-27T02:59:00.000+00:002008-02-27T02:59:00.000+00:00These clouds you describe are magical.These clouds you describe are magical.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-77523047580333994402008-02-26T18:17:00.000+00:002008-02-26T18:17:00.000+00:00Wonderful poem- the sound is great. I had to read ...Wonderful poem- the sound is great. I had to read it aloud, and enjoyed it very much.<BR/><BR/>I was reminded of my two boys, who went out to the front yard to watch the eclipse.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-13512905565621924192008-02-26T12:28:00.000+00:002008-02-26T12:28:00.000+00:00Too busy, too sophisticated, not interested in any...Too busy, too sophisticated, not interested in anything beyond physical senses. At least the children see. Excellent poem!!Pat Paulkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03673667238840127360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-56731983382459194292008-02-26T11:18:00.000+00:002008-02-26T11:18:00.000+00:00This is wonderful. I have been both child and moth...This is wonderful. I have been both child and mother as you describe them here. The imagery is delectable.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-2074327757522356132008-02-26T01:56:00.000+00:002008-02-26T01:56:00.000+00:00Very nice--so true how a child sees with that inno...Very nice--so true how a child sees with that innocence that is lost in adults. <BR/>Knowing how magical a moment can be.nina at Nature Remains.https://www.blogger.com/profile/07888238636692649668noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-27813375265652858872008-02-26T01:01:00.000+00:002008-02-26T01:01:00.000+00:00they say when we are young,, our minds still share...they say when we are young,, our minds still share memories with that which came before this life... i wonder often when i see the integrity with which children devote to things we take for granted,,, if this is not true....paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-21162979507496454692008-02-26T00:36:00.000+00:002008-02-26T00:36:00.000+00:00interesting and engaging poetry, Crafty :) I've n...interesting and engaging poetry, Crafty :) I've never seen such clouds myself, but if I did I'd surely take them as an omen of good fortune! <BR/><BR/>thanks for dropping by my place earlier, its always good to see you.<BR/><BR/>dd sinclairhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09205154196418180684noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-11961005900218777752008-02-25T22:27:00.000+00:002008-02-25T22:27:00.000+00:00I have a scrap of paper somewhere with "mother of ...I have a scrap of paper somewhere with "mother of pearl clouds" written on it (upon seeing such clouds). Well-done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-44355871934553172902008-02-25T21:09:00.000+00:002008-02-25T21:09:00.000+00:00I loved that not only were astromoners looking, bu...I loved that not only were astromoners looking, but also mothers and children. The ending is perfect!Joyce Ellen Davishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13494251587598676788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-73250113459173291322008-02-25T19:59:00.000+00:002008-02-25T19:59:00.000+00:00i love anything with clouds in it (my surname does...i love anything with clouds in it (my surname does not mean 'cloud' for nothing) and this one is particularly wonderfulpolonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-13883109464547942192008-02-25T17:50:00.000+00:002008-02-25T17:50:00.000+00:00Hi Juliet!what a lovely blog you have here. I real...Hi Juliet!<BR/><BR/>what a lovely blog you have here. I really like your poems, I will be back!Oh and can I add I am a fan of Scottish history and have been reading about it for the last year. I live in the PNW of the U.S. much like Scotland, the rain and all.Dawnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08754977794843612673noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-89643890288212048962008-02-25T15:47:00.000+00:002008-02-25T15:47:00.000+00:00So true - children stopping in their track to look...So true - children stopping in their track to look up and wonder. Some adults do too.<BR/><BR/>I loved this poem. Thank you.katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03979577122006222781noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-62591782274772727792008-02-25T15:36:00.000+00:002008-02-25T15:36:00.000+00:00Too many great lines. I can't pick. A pleasure to ...Too many great lines. I can't pick. A pleasure to read this, Juliet!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-87689666539286998132008-02-25T15:35:00.000+00:002008-02-25T15:35:00.000+00:00Excellent poem. Whilst I'm pleased we've conquered...Excellent poem. Whilst I'm pleased we've conquered superstition and acquired reason, we have taken it too far. To understand the symbolism of the world as the ancients did is as much about us being human as our rationality.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-57681118182700967842008-02-25T14:52:00.000+00:002008-02-25T14:52:00.000+00:00I'm this was published, it is a brilliant poem. Th...I'm this was published, it is a brilliant poem. The pull of the natural world still tugs, even though we do our best to ignore.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-64588456675331229152008-02-25T14:37:00.000+00:002008-02-25T14:37:00.000+00:00Love the theme of this one Juliet - it brought bac...Love the theme of this one Juliet - it brought back memories of youth, of laying on the grass on many a warm afternoon staring up at the clouds.<BR/>Watching the power of an approaching storm with huge cumulus clouds at age 11 was the start of my own poetic beginnings.Janice Thomsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-54579033359761015532008-02-25T14:35:00.000+00:002008-02-25T14:35:00.000+00:00Love it!Love it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-40704838490173267222008-02-25T14:25:00.000+00:002008-02-25T14:25:00.000+00:00i like the bit about, mothers hurry children onwar...i like the bit about, mothers hurry children onward home, very nice. i can relate, sometimes we do need to just stop and stare at the clouds.Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05188365355748586948noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-45465207886826420642008-02-25T13:52:00.000+00:002008-02-25T13:52:00.000+00:00You really captured the clouds in here! And I lik...You really captured the clouds in here! And I like the bits of realism with the mothers and kids and, really, the fish fingers just make the poem!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-30165014677759656052008-02-25T13:48:00.000+00:002008-02-25T13:48:00.000+00:00"This power of the heavens reaching out,Demanding ..."This power of the heavens reaching out,<BR/>Demanding their time to be still and watch.<BR/>They know it will be fish fingers again tomorrow,<BR/>But mother of pearl clouds not for twenty years." are my favoritesULhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15005895432233940416noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-85877331926913467262008-02-25T13:47:00.000+00:002008-02-25T13:47:00.000+00:00STP - glad you liked that piece of contrast....des...STP - glad you liked that piece of contrast....<BR/><BR/>despairing, so there is hope for you yet! Thanks for the links. I haven't called on the poetry gods, honest!Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-80995645003577400192008-02-25T12:29:00.000+00:002008-02-25T12:29:00.000+00:00Okay, I'll admit to liking this. A wee bit!!I'm co...Okay, I'll admit to liking this. A wee bit!!<BR/><BR/>I'm completely blaming you for being surrounded by poetry in the last few days. I've come t ot he conclusion that after I confessed to not liking poetry, you somehow called on the poetry gods to teach me a lesson. Hence Green As A Thistle going all Haiku: http://greenasathistle.com/2008/02/24/a-greener-form-of-poetry-day-361/<BR/>and then Wild Green Yonder getting in on the act: http://wildgreenyonder.wordpress.com/2008/02/24/i-rose-from-the-mountains-like-campfire-smoke/Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17416029695260860437noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-72718713017102696592008-02-25T12:01:00.000+00:002008-02-25T12:01:00.000+00:00I love the imagery that this poem opens with. It ...I love the imagery that this poem opens with. It starts the mind off right away thinking in colors and visions. Also, I liked the routineness of the fish fingers up against the magnificence of the rainbows.STPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18010661731570038007noreply@blogger.com