tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post3635576052972949331..comments2024-03-28T10:05:36.756+00:00Comments on Crafty Green Poet: haiku - shadow and lightCrafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-49362438441659654722007-07-09T10:12:00.000+01:002007-07-09T10:12:00.000+01:00Hello Juliet, thanks so much for your comments on ...Hello Juliet, thanks so much for your comments on my blog about criticism. I have spoken to Susan about it and I'm most definitely NOT put off!! If anything, it's only reaffirmed all my original intentions for writing haiku and taking part. Thanks also for the note about Japanese-English syllables re the 5-7-5 form, makes me feel freer!<BR/><BR/>Regards<BR/>T xHeartfulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12005260190867133282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-75319212505365993592007-07-07T05:11:00.000+01:002007-07-07T05:11:00.000+01:00Love the way you used patchwork!Love the way you used patchwork!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-75346827588084986982007-07-06T19:46:00.000+01:002007-07-06T19:46:00.000+01:00I love "patchwork." As Brian said, yes, it's geniu...I love "patchwork." As Brian said, yes, it's genius. Wonderful imagery in my head. Thanks.Patois42https://www.blogger.com/profile/07764936858778730692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-90180415971619988582007-07-06T00:53:00.000+01:002007-07-06T00:53:00.000+01:00I really like the image of patchwork, but I am so ...I really like the image of patchwork, but I am so partial to evening sun shadows across the land and with all the trees and the hill to the West of us, be get awesome light play and your haiku brings the visualMarcia (MeeAugraphie)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00656288704821106002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-14672889535559303312007-07-05T17:13:00.000+01:002007-07-05T17:13:00.000+01:00BEAUTIFUL :)BEAUTIFUL :)Kayt Ludihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09816768450828488122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-35655206401641278942007-07-05T02:47:00.000+01:002007-07-05T02:47:00.000+01:00Lovely images. I especially like the image of a pa...Lovely images. I especially like the image of a patchwork of light and shade.Rae Trigghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10727737549878623376noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-10173687844538791922007-07-04T16:11:00.000+01:002007-07-04T16:11:00.000+01:00beautifully reflective and stillbeautifully reflective and stillHeartfulhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12005260190867133282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-47153320383751249292007-07-04T10:45:00.000+01:002007-07-04T10:45:00.000+01:00My response to these was 'yes' - I could understan...My response to these was 'yes' - I could understand them, and picture them, and relate to them. Top stuff!jemhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08181038873568527264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-90294309046822657252007-07-04T00:18:00.000+01:002007-07-04T00:18:00.000+01:00Enjoy the idea of a patchwork of clouds.Enjoy the idea of a patchwork of clouds.strausshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10277562911746970978noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-83186047195271536192007-07-03T21:05:00.000+01:002007-07-03T21:05:00.000+01:00That second one is lovely. And so evocative....That second one is lovely. And so evocative....Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-9432057701111486972007-07-03T17:43:00.000+01:002007-07-03T17:43:00.000+01:00I like both. The first reminds me of hearing what...I like both. The first reminds me of hearing what my great grandmother had to say after going up in an airplane, "Why, the land just looks like a big ol' quilt!" And she stopped being afraid of it after that.<BR/><BR/>The second, though, speaks to me of the quiet moments as dusk comes on. Beautiful.Plain Foolishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02922112483988477841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-88189295376995956742007-07-03T17:28:00.000+01:002007-07-03T17:28:00.000+01:00The patchwork image really works well! Lovely, bot...The patchwork image really works well! Lovely, both.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-12903625689174655862007-07-03T16:45:00.000+01:002007-07-03T16:45:00.000+01:00The first one reminds me of an Amish quilting patt...The first one reminds me of an Amish quilting pattern! The second one is just deliciously simple...Reginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14287107184977896696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-11808541547677480472007-07-03T13:30:00.000+01:002007-07-03T13:30:00.000+01:00Two perfect descriptions of moving light!Two perfect descriptions of moving light!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-88578080966009082112007-07-03T10:03:00.000+01:002007-07-03T10:03:00.000+01:00Polona - thanks!George - yes the first one is my f...Polona - thanks!<BR/><BR/>George - yes the first one is my favourite too!<BR/><BR/>Brian - genius? wow, thanks!<BR/><BR/>Clare - glad you like the visual images!Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-5118632531391297392007-07-03T07:44:00.000+01:002007-07-03T07:44:00.000+01:00Really pretty! They both create really nice visua...Really pretty! They both create really nice visuals with patchwork and tree's shadows.<BR/>:)Clarehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11746014771712020963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-86131077440248018182007-07-03T03:26:00.000+01:002007-07-03T03:26:00.000+01:00patchwork... very nice! this is the second poem to...patchwork... very nice! this is the second poem today that has made me rethink light by some genius use of a verbBrianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06289013669698459078noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-25209638040133949772007-07-02T23:45:00.000+01:002007-07-02T23:45:00.000+01:00I especially like the first one.I especially like the first one.Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17118138744854451450noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-69092304490703660282007-07-02T21:30:00.000+01:002007-07-02T21:30:00.000+01:00well done!well done!polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.com