tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post116645470887628015..comments2024-03-28T10:05:36.756+00:00Comments on Crafty Green Poet: haiku - stormsCrafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1166650886507082652006-12-20T21:41:00.000+00:002006-12-20T21:41:00.000+00:00yes yesI like the first one. I bet that tree fell ...yes yes<BR/><BR/>I like the first one. I bet that tree fell down and you could see the roots. I can see it now.Achilleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14810799938627187351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1166587500180954282006-12-20T04:05:00.000+00:002006-12-20T04:05:00.000+00:00lightening forksover the hills by the lake -a dry,...lightening forks<BR/>over the hills by the lake -<BR/>a dry, silent night<BR/><BR/>this is so good I can feel the electric tension that fills the air during a storm.meganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00752325087812245351noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1166565193305400102006-12-19T21:53:00.000+00:002006-12-19T21:53:00.000+00:00Both of these are wonderful. :)Both of these are wonderful. :)Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07815553702716450707noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1166556202477201832006-12-19T19:23:00.000+00:002006-12-19T19:23:00.000+00:00I really like all haiku on both sites, but "lighte...I really like all haiku on both sites, but <BR/><BR/>"lightening forks<BR/>over the hills by the lake -<BR/>a dry, silent night"<BR/><BR/>is my favorite. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1166537838162700792006-12-19T14:17:00.000+00:002006-12-19T14:17:00.000+00:00Good contrasts: floods and drainage ditches, light...Good contrasts: floods and drainage ditches, lightening and dry silence. Nicely done!Andromeda Jazmonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12355192738014962965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1166482367748791792006-12-18T22:52:00.000+00:002006-12-18T22:52:00.000+00:00These are good. I can't imagine lightning without ...These are good. I can't imagine lightning without a thunder warning.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1166480315916139732006-12-18T22:18:00.000+00:002006-12-18T22:18:00.000+00:00Both of these are wonderful. I especially like th...Both of these are wonderful. I especially like the second and the description "ligtening forks".Tiffanyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07191011478662020856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1166477103628617052006-12-18T21:25:00.000+00:002006-12-18T21:25:00.000+00:00These haiku beautifully capture the high dramatic ...These haiku beautifully capture the high dramatic impact of storms.paris parfaithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05457437124988976587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1166475597463032502006-12-18T20:59:00.000+00:002006-12-18T20:59:00.000+00:00These were wonderful! The second one was a very co...These were wonderful! The second one was a very cool image.Tammy Brierlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1166474599243054922006-12-18T20:43:00.000+00:002006-12-18T20:43:00.000+00:00I love the movement in the first haiku...from the ...I love the movement in the first haiku...<BR/>from the flooding to travelling through to falling.michellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15684528126514742135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1166473213356560892006-12-18T20:20:00.000+00:002006-12-18T20:20:00.000+00:00Nice work on both of these. I can just see and ex...Nice work on both of these. I can just see and experience them.Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.com