tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post116220274902425615..comments2024-03-28T10:05:36.756+00:00Comments on Crafty Green Poet: Haiku - the unseenCrafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1162496296572115772006-11-02T19:38:00.000+00:002006-11-02T19:38:00.000+00:00I liked the first one on an intellectual level, bu...I liked the first one on an intellectual level, but I really felt the second. One of my favourite fragrances.Mimeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13549790359115165117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1162453729336732902006-11-02T07:48:00.000+00:002006-11-02T07:48:00.000+00:00honeysuckle, irresistible! I find haiku not so eas...honeysuckle, irresistible! I find haiku not so easy to write, but you clearly mastered it..keep it up ;)Doehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18133281861291670527noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1162440731120627432006-11-02T04:12:00.000+00:002006-11-02T04:12:00.000+00:00Ah! scents! I knew I was missing something. Great ...Ah! scents! I knew I was missing something. Great verses here.Larry Kollarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08317037795075278427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1162376374167865442006-11-01T10:19:00.000+00:002006-11-01T10:19:00.000+00:00both paragraphs are great...though everybody can p...both paragraphs are great...<BR/>though everybody can perceive differently atmosphere and darkness, ur description seem like extraordinarily precise and "right", even if there's not right and wrong perceptions in such subjective matters and meanings<BR/>ps i liked ur poem in the previous post also<BR/>thanx for ur kind wish in one of my postsyioenghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15035120725639071967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1162285287447791132006-10-31T09:01:00.000+00:002006-10-31T09:01:00.000+00:00I love the honeysuckle one too. Beautiful!I love the honeysuckle one too. Beautiful!Andromeda Jazmonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12355192738014962965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1162262063506699762006-10-31T02:34:00.000+00:002006-10-31T02:34:00.000+00:00wonderful reminders.wonderful reminders.Annie Jeffrieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15415548089882625246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1162252592682602402006-10-30T23:56:00.000+00:002006-10-30T23:56:00.000+00:00Atmosphere ~ a great topic for something unseen, y...Atmosphere ~ a great topic for something unseen, yet vital to us all!<BR/><BR/>Nicely done :)Beccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623887166087444590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1162249833833531772006-10-30T23:10:00.000+00:002006-10-30T23:10:00.000+00:00I didn't think of scents - perfect for the topic -...I didn't think of scents - perfect for the topic - rosemary is one of my favourites in summerCatherinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08236329216260906624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1162247487916659512006-10-30T22:31:00.000+00:002006-10-30T22:31:00.000+00:00nice poems! a reminder that not all memories are v...nice poems! a reminder that not all memories are visualAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1162236434001751962006-10-30T19:27:00.000+00:002006-10-30T19:27:00.000+00:00I love the second one -it transmits the loveliness...I love the second one -it transmits the loveliness of summer nights perfectly!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1162234029668522412006-10-30T18:47:00.000+00:002006-10-30T18:47:00.000+00:00Thanks for the comments folks - honeysucklie is so...Thanks for the comments folks - honeysucklie is so very evocative , isn't it? And Roswila, welcome to Crafty green POet - thanks for visiting!Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1162230389899398192006-10-30T17:46:00.000+00:002006-10-30T17:46:00.000+00:00"scent of honeysuckle" lovely haiku... kudos"scent of honeysuckle" lovely haiku... kudosRoswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1162220744584570762006-10-30T15:05:00.000+00:002006-10-30T15:05:00.000+00:00Ah, the scent of honeysuckle! Lots of that - and j...Ah, the scent of honeysuckle! Lots of that - and jasmine - in Sevilla. Lovely haiku!paris parfaithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05457437124988976587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1162216980510558022006-10-30T14:03:00.000+00:002006-10-30T14:03:00.000+00:00This is a hard one to say and yet you have done 2 ...This is a hard one to say and yet you have done 2 of them perfectly. :)Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07815553702716450707noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1162207822878037332006-10-30T11:30:00.000+00:002006-10-30T11:30:00.000+00:00Wonderful remindersthe remembered scent of honeysu...Wonderful reminders<BR/>the remembered scent of honeysuckle fills my mind :)Endmenthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13711896605197134394noreply@blogger.com