tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post115433735669290906..comments2024-03-28T10:05:36.756+00:00Comments on Crafty Green Poet: Garden haikuCrafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-85047317433320202282010-06-08T21:35:46.381+01:002010-06-08T21:35:46.381+01:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.buy viagrahttp://www.xlpharmacy.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1154637583328773032006-08-03T21:39:00.000+01:002006-08-03T21:39:00.000+01:00Beautiful imagery :)Beautiful imagery :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1154629763385868182006-08-03T19:29:00.000+01:002006-08-03T19:29:00.000+01:00I like the crow one best.I like the crow one best.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1154620084521604382006-08-03T16:48:00.000+01:002006-08-03T16:48:00.000+01:00Fabulous work. Each of these is visual, evocative...Fabulous work. Each of these is visual, evocative, a world complete and inviting yet mysterious and unknowable, too. I love them.<BR/><BR/>Jenniferjennifer blackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10162940461142708018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1154602880038119652006-08-03T12:01:00.000+01:002006-08-03T12:01:00.000+01:00You do here the thing that I most struggle with in...You do here the thing that I most struggle with in haiku and that is to write a lovely piece (in this case four of them) that isn't dependant on "I" or "me". That's staying true to the form. <BR/><BR/>Others have said it, but I'll also say that the winter piece strikes me most. Something about it is so...true. You're a good writer.bgfay.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08992793292580911273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1154594781142603122006-08-03T09:46:00.000+01:002006-08-03T09:46:00.000+01:00HI everyoneThanks so much for your comments!HI everyone<BR/>Thanks so much for your comments!Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1154515925777397642006-08-02T11:52:00.000+01:002006-08-02T11:52:00.000+01:00These are very good. my favorite is the first, re...These are very good. my favorite is the first, really great stuff.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1154462307483188002006-08-01T20:58:00.000+01:002006-08-01T20:58:00.000+01:00Absolutely brilliant you have captured the seasons...Absolutely brilliant you have captured the seasons beautifully.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1154460308274560242006-08-01T20:25:00.000+01:002006-08-01T20:25:00.000+01:00You really did an excellent job of capturing image...You really did an excellent job of capturing images of the seasons using haiku.Tammy Brierlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1154436752484474372006-08-01T13:52:00.000+01:002006-08-01T13:52:00.000+01:00not one but four, we have th pleasure of reading.m...not one but four, we have th pleasure of reading.<BR/>my favourite is the last one..winter.<BR/>i like the contrast you've used and the line'one crown on the lawn'.<BR/>great wordsMadeleinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03515694965912176762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1154433417340011962006-08-01T12:56:00.000+01:002006-08-01T12:56:00.000+01:00Oh, very well done! You've captured the essence o...Oh, very well done! You've captured the essence of each season splendidly.Kimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16867218249789726722noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1154431355230703202006-08-01T12:22:00.000+01:002006-08-01T12:22:00.000+01:00Yes, they are very good, and so descriptive! I wou...Yes, they are very good, and so descriptive! I would like to be there!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1154422952269838522006-08-01T10:02:00.000+01:002006-08-01T10:02:00.000+01:00My favourite is the last one-*one crow on the lawn...My favourite is the last one-<BR/><BR/>*one crow on the lawn* -<BR/><BR/>fills me with a still beauty.claireylovehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16691439928758477628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1154381292542923182006-07-31T22:28:00.000+01:002006-07-31T22:28:00.000+01:00These are truly lovely - the epitome of haiku. I ...These are truly lovely - the epitome of haiku. I especially liked winter with it's "stark black branches." Well done!Beccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623887166087444590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1154374195905535282006-07-31T20:29:00.000+01:002006-07-31T20:29:00.000+01:00Great haiku! I just love how you've taken us thro...Great haiku! I just love how you've taken us through season by season--wonderful idea (wish I'd had it).Starhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14814216163517685438noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1154367209544509542006-07-31T18:33:00.000+01:002006-07-31T18:33:00.000+01:00Excellent job! And it is a terrific idea, all four...Excellent job! And it is a terrific idea, all four seasons... <BR/><BR/>Love the heron... waiting for those frogs to grow a little.SLWhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07574103178321487531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1154365478766905262006-07-31T18:04:00.000+01:002006-07-31T18:04:00.000+01:00I admire the idea (why didn't I think of that??) f...I admire the idea (why didn't I think of that??) first of all.<BR/><BR/>I like the mirroring of heron/crow, air/smoke too. And how the images are painted in colour and scent. Vivid.Mimeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13549790359115165117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1154362976817132352006-07-31T17:22:00.000+01:002006-07-31T17:22:00.000+01:00ah, these are truly poetic. i appreciate the adher...ah, these are truly poetic. i appreciate the adherence to haiku style here, you've created beautiful word images.Ian russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11106519805045337505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1154361587912708322006-07-31T16:59:00.000+01:002006-07-31T16:59:00.000+01:00I like how you used the four seasons as subjects. ...I like how you used the four seasons as subjects. Well done!paris parfaithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05457437124988976587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1154360150066156562006-07-31T16:35:00.000+01:002006-07-31T16:35:00.000+01:00very lovely images, love the 4 seasons captured. g...very lovely images, love the 4 seasons captured. great job!Jennifer S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04095295914294471508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1154359651332373502006-07-31T16:27:00.000+01:002006-07-31T16:27:00.000+01:00Please pardon the phrase but these are indeed "wel...Please pardon the phrase but these are indeed "well crafted." They paint such gentle lovely images. My favorite line is "party on the lawn."susanlavonnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02579948528761683764noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1154351562008172662006-07-31T14:12:00.000+01:002006-07-31T14:12:00.000+01:00you're right; formally they are probably some of t...you're right; formally they are probably some of the best of yours. Very Japanese, very visual, and very formal, although I've got more used to your "freer" poems. I think my favourite out of this selection is probably the winter one.Niahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04574047190631298074noreply@blogger.com