tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post4833689588776776955..comments2024-03-28T10:05:36.756+00:00Comments on Crafty Green Poet: Parallel RealitiesCrafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-22538754040724570702018-10-19T08:14:54.434+01:002018-10-19T08:14:54.434+01:00wonderful poem :Dwonderful poem :DGabrielle Brydenhttps://gabriellebryden.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-74624527623877924702018-10-16T15:37:13.911+01:002018-10-16T15:37:13.911+01:00Good work! I haven't done a poem in ages!Good work! I haven't done a poem in ages!Jenn Jilkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05259681360456905055noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-61307464175224692742008-07-11T21:40:00.000+01:002008-07-11T21:40:00.000+01:00i've read this a few times now, and it gets better...i've read this a few times now, and it gets better with each one!Ms Afropolitanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16456916593005915089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-54411877766051678302008-07-08T14:12:00.000+01:002008-07-08T14:12:00.000+01:00I like this. It creates suh great images inside my...I like this. It creates suh great images inside my mind!gautami tripathyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04192356825699543613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-12735572617603655562008-07-08T06:34:00.000+01:002008-07-08T06:34:00.000+01:00The imagery in this poem is amazing.The imagery in this poem is amazing.Christy Woolumhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02748862572108653566noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-41123571287418715012008-07-07T23:43:00.000+01:002008-07-07T23:43:00.000+01:00What I really liked was how in this instance, the ...What I really liked was how in this instance, the presence of light actually made it more difficult to see clearly, which was a lovely departure from what one usually thinks about light. Very nice.chicklegirlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03000215636803243874noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-40567471567172312862008-07-07T21:32:00.000+01:002008-07-07T21:32:00.000+01:00I can relate. I feel as though I don't belong, als...I can relate. I feel as though I don't belong, also.Noah the Greathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11777681562599472033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-74192894854839952752008-07-07T20:56:00.000+01:002008-07-07T20:56:00.000+01:00it is a surreal imagine conveyed...plains stretch ...it is a surreal imagine conveyed...plains stretch forever... dreaming shadows into being.. whether it is a glass lens or a writers pen.. all that is clearAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-8012714304595559692008-07-07T19:38:00.000+01:002008-07-07T19:38:00.000+01:00I like the way you introduce the glass at the begi...I like the way you introduce the glass at the beginning, but make us wait to the second verse to find out what this image is about!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-73937203378041361072008-07-07T17:26:00.000+01:002008-07-07T17:26:00.000+01:00sharing the space, and yet living in different rea...sharing the space, and yet living in different realities... excellent!polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-79962915630881316252008-07-07T15:57:00.000+01:002008-07-07T15:57:00.000+01:00It's kind of strange, we must be on a similar wave...It's kind of strange, we must be on a similar wavelength, because I wrote about dreaming shadows into existence, sort of.<BR/><BR/>You create a scenario and an atmosphere of beauty and mystery, with a photographer observing a rider, and his relationship to the landscape. Evocative.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-90915915186124993542008-07-07T15:49:00.000+01:002008-07-07T15:49:00.000+01:00One gets a real sense of the bleak landscape from ...One gets a real sense of the bleak landscape from both the visitor and the one who lives there. I very much enjoyed the imagery of hot and dry dusty plains. Well done Juliet.Janice Thomsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-55440570440828793422008-07-07T14:50:00.000+01:002008-07-07T14:50:00.000+01:00This is fun. To me, it's like seeing the same sce...This is fun. To me, it's like seeing the same scene twice -- once in each stanza -- like two eyes with slightly different views through the same pair of binoculars. Great with the dust, grimy, scratches, and the alliteration. I enjoy this a lot.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-83060727279133159172008-07-07T14:46:00.000+01:002008-07-07T14:46:00.000+01:00I love the message here: "She cannot see the mount...I love the message here: <BR/>"She cannot see the mountains<BR/>so the lone horseman plods<BR/>forever into nothing."<BR/><BR/>An interesting take on the prompt.mareymercyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03407666873261385487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-85290383328888158122008-07-07T12:46:00.000+01:002008-07-07T12:46:00.000+01:00I like dreaming shadows into being too.I like dreaming shadows into being too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-16076505911200506502008-07-07T12:34:00.000+01:002008-07-07T12:34:00.000+01:00interesting conceptinteresting conceptScothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09719725764131827872noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-44360020858213992852008-07-07T12:32:00.000+01:002008-07-07T12:32:00.000+01:00That the horseman, through the lens, goes into not...That the horseman, through the lens, goes into nothing outside of the context of time, his context, this is brilliant. Says something important about what we get of the world through the media. This is a great poem.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-71254258812118312522008-07-07T11:33:00.000+01:002008-07-07T11:33:00.000+01:00Very nice--I adore the line, "dreaming shadows int...Very nice--I adore the line, "dreaming shadows into being!"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-18555516425289359232008-07-07T11:09:00.000+01:002008-07-07T11:09:00.000+01:00Some great images here - mostly of the mind rather...Some great images here - mostly of the mind rather than reality. It is usually thus with us humans, me thinks.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-35740491846271333632008-07-07T10:16:00.000+01:002008-07-07T10:16:00.000+01:00This converys a very vivid picture - I especially ...This converys a very vivid picture - I especially liked the idea of her trying to dream shadows into beingCatherinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08236329216260906624noreply@blogger.com