tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post428345435720525952..comments2024-03-28T10:05:36.756+00:00Comments on Crafty Green Poet: haiku - nurtureCrafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-83365523382961843862007-05-21T17:41:00.000+01:002007-05-21T17:41:00.000+01:00i like these haikus - esp. the green shoot in the ...i like these haikus - esp. the green shoot in the red watering can :-)Kristi Tencarrehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07729636012450960534noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-61673505879602261702007-05-19T00:49:00.000+01:002007-05-19T00:49:00.000+01:00Your first one spoke to me, it was enough on its o...Your first one spoke to me, it was enough on its own and yet I knew that any second another color could appear - or not.Marcia (MeeAugraphie)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00656288704821106002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-27890504660237087132007-05-17T19:56:00.000+01:002007-05-17T19:56:00.000+01:00The colour of the first was palpable. Mmm.The colour of the first was palpable. Mmm.Mimeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13549790359115165117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-44771168160291539072007-05-17T10:08:00.000+01:002007-05-17T10:08:00.000+01:00i particularly liked the 'jumble of twigs' in the ...i particularly liked the 'jumble of twigs' in the snapshot of the second haiku, and the colourful elements of the natural recipe in the first.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-25943567829766419272007-05-16T17:32:00.000+01:002007-05-16T17:32:00.000+01:00I am unable to add anything to what others have sa...I am unable to add anything to what others have said. I like them both very much.Patois42https://www.blogger.com/profile/07764936858778730692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-84915383410565577112007-05-16T08:12:00.000+01:002007-05-16T08:12:00.000+01:00You are very 'crafty' indeed with your poems... I ...You are very 'crafty' indeed with your poems... I really like these haiku. The traditional feel to them is divine.Blondiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08726153633438333682noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-73261795479085724452007-05-16T08:09:00.000+01:002007-05-16T08:09:00.000+01:00Really nice haikus. In the first one I love the c...Really nice haikus. In the first one I love the colors and how the haiku is rich with new life. In the second one I love the variety of images and also the squawking chicks -- I can hear them as I read it.Clarehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11746014771712020963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-9511040841428420772007-05-15T22:08:00.000+01:002007-05-15T22:08:00.000+01:00These are so full of color! Love the first one es...These are so full of color! Love the first one especially :)Beccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623887166087444590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-37161156330331773062007-05-15T18:29:00.000+01:002007-05-15T18:29:00.000+01:00I loved how you gave us the image of a red can and...I loved how you gave us the image of a red can and a fresh salmon as nurtures.Tammy Brierlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-78125367661079038872007-05-15T16:38:00.000+01:002007-05-15T16:38:00.000+01:00I enjoyed both of these very much. The first does...I enjoyed both of these very much. The first does sound like roots haiku. Very nice...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-17910079350657209372007-05-15T15:23:00.000+01:002007-05-15T15:23:00.000+01:00Yes, very nice, well crafted haiku. The clarity of...Yes, very nice, well crafted haiku. The clarity of the first and the "aha" moment is wonderful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-83243026381637920982007-05-15T14:45:00.000+01:002007-05-15T14:45:00.000+01:00...interesting read, enjoyed the haiku....interesting read, enjoyed the haiku.written voizehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11231300046763608092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-9620769988474300712007-05-15T14:28:00.000+01:002007-05-15T14:28:00.000+01:00Oh, these were both wonderful- very sensual and vi...Oh, these were both wonderful- very sensual and vivid in their imagery!Reginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14287107184977896696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-30668961363673879972007-05-15T14:07:00.000+01:002007-05-15T14:07:00.000+01:00The first one sounds very oriental. I like it.The first one sounds very oriental. I like it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-49928404971902886302007-05-15T08:56:00.000+01:002007-05-15T08:56:00.000+01:00fifi - thanks - glad it reminds you of your mom!Su...fifi - thanks - glad it reminds you of your mom!<BR/><BR/>Susan - thanks, "aha momentness" - yes I've never found a good way of saying that either!<BR/><BR/>Polona - thanks!Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-52959437373411935532007-05-14T22:07:00.000+01:002007-05-14T22:07:00.000+01:00beautiful, especially like the second one...beautiful, especially like the second one...polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-85009806856099231722007-05-14T18:36:00.000+01:002007-05-14T18:36:00.000+01:00i love the "aha! moment-ness" of this ! (despite m...i love the "aha! moment-ness" of this ! (despite my lame description)susanlavonnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06199263273657594890noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-19885122941122058482007-05-14T18:08:00.000+01:002007-05-14T18:08:00.000+01:00beautiful haiku.I like the first especially. I see...beautiful haiku.<BR/>I like the first especially. I see my mom planting and watering.<BR/><BR/>Also liked your "silence" post and that you included the source of your recycled materials.Marciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09498377848141535086noreply@blogger.com