tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post4044330815557415203..comments2024-03-14T16:17:34.578+00:00Comments on Crafty Green Poet: Leaves for Weekend WordsmithCrafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-17762500603822459062008-12-02T05:06:00.000+00:002008-12-02T05:06:00.000+00:00I loved this. So short, but really tells the story...I loved this. So short, but really tells the story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-51053225986469930132008-12-01T03:19:00.000+00:002008-12-01T03:19:00.000+00:00I like this one, too, Juliet. The tension of the s...I like this one, too, Juliet. The tension of the steps being hidden under the leaves, then the unexpected ending that directs you away from the first two lines. It makes you turn your head towards the blackbird. Thanks to you, I've been educating myself on the haiku so I don't sound <B>totally</B> ignorant on the subject :)<BR/><BR/>~Nancy (Every Photo)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-18326971130547902592008-11-28T20:13:00.000+00:002008-11-28T20:13:00.000+00:00Moving from an artificially? serene image of the c...Moving from an artificially? serene image of the changing season, the image of a blackbird calling almost sounds ominous, warning of don't let prettiness fool you!<BR/><BR/>Interesting haiku!Gemma Wisemanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17466540188839321484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-4800124825239707912008-11-28T19:37:00.000+00:002008-11-28T19:37:00.000+00:00Very mysterious,but a nice imagery...wishes, devik...Very mysterious,<BR/>but a nice imagery...<BR/><BR/><BR/>wishes, <BR/>devikaDevika Jyothihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02349153846127145464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-26111897726741185442008-11-28T17:36:00.000+00:002008-11-28T17:36:00.000+00:00a warning?anyway, a lovely image.a warning?<BR/>anyway, a lovely image.polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-89992454334736343652008-11-28T15:31:00.000+00:002008-11-28T15:31:00.000+00:00Really nice. Love the blackbird at the end.Really nice. Love the blackbird at the end.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-87651372027897509052008-11-28T13:00:00.000+00:002008-11-28T13:00:00.000+00:00I love watching them scratch midst the leaves for ...I love watching them scratch midst the leaves for worms and insects. Wonderful image Juliet.Janice Thomsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-79920472833792128722008-11-28T11:25:00.000+00:002008-11-28T11:25:00.000+00:00Nice image.Nice image.The Weaver of Grasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13947971556343746883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-36743798479475240262008-11-28T11:18:00.000+00:002008-11-28T11:18:00.000+00:00Do those leaves bother the blackbird? I wonder. Is...Do those leaves bother the blackbird? I wonder. Is he calling you to clean them up, or calling friends to come play in them with him? I'll have to watch the blackbirds in my back yard to see.Doug P. Bakerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10259297751420532238noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-35822805350098242012008-11-28T11:14:00.000+00:002008-11-28T11:14:00.000+00:00It does draw a nice picture!It does draw a nice picture!Art and Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01991284507367796696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-23735557111407488192008-11-28T11:13:00.000+00:002008-11-28T11:13:00.000+00:00Lovely. A bit naughty - I like that: the first two...Lovely. A bit naughty - I like that: the first two lines suggest some impending misfortune and the last just totally ignores it and goes off elsewhere. Delicious.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-14722112736839232842008-11-28T09:38:00.000+00:002008-11-28T09:38:00.000+00:00Fabulous. I can see it so clearly.Fabulous. I can see it so clearly.Rachel Greenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13048590167153841615noreply@blogger.com