tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post1269250853596687078..comments2024-03-28T10:05:36.756+00:00Comments on Crafty Green Poet: Crazy Bird MusicCrafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-84180574050939160432008-09-05T14:28:00.000+01:002008-09-05T14:28:00.000+01:00It's very different, poetry about birds is always ...It's very different, poetry about birds is always nice!Art and Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01991284507367796696noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-42183632523165378592008-09-03T21:35:00.000+01:002008-09-03T21:35:00.000+01:00as a gardener i cherish those moments outside.. yo...as a gardener i cherish those moments outside.. you caught the timing of late summer early autumn bird's song beautifully... especially so with "...But today is still August and as I trim our hedge.."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-36219136341514374392008-09-03T06:35:00.000+01:002008-09-03T06:35:00.000+01:00How interesting that you didn't say that the night...How interesting that you didn't say that the nightingale has the saddest music in the world.<BR/><BR/>I like the lines in stanza 2 and the feeling of being stuck in the seasons throughout the poem.<BR/><BR/>Thanks for sharing.Ambiguitylotushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01247817064783732958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-46517544557479099232008-09-02T11:31:00.000+01:002008-09-02T11:31:00.000+01:00This is lovely. It's interesting too that, like th...This is lovely. It's interesting too that, like the previous comment mentioned, where I live the robin is a sign of spring.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-84169211718128787152008-09-02T05:49:00.000+01:002008-09-02T05:49:00.000+01:00Wow! Honestly, that was my first reaction to your ...Wow! Honestly, that was my first reaction to your post. Impressed with how you took off from your line of inspiration.susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14924982664582970754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-59203592946662460652008-09-02T01:41:00.000+01:002008-09-02T01:41:00.000+01:00The pathos of the robin's song is so real in your ...The pathos of the robin's song is so real in your poem. Great stuff. It was especially poignant to click and listen to it's wee voice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-85133222677122141042008-09-01T23:19:00.000+01:002008-09-01T23:19:00.000+01:00I love the melancholy of this. very nice.I love the melancholy of this. very nice.mareymercyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03407666873261385487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-5710156513170707152008-09-01T12:38:00.000+01:002008-09-01T12:38:00.000+01:00I agree with what's been said earlier about the ha...I agree with what's been said earlier about the haunting quality of this piece. I relate to this; our leaves are just starting to turn, after a very wet, gray summer, and it seems impossible that autumn is nearly here already.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-53653029993051607602008-09-01T09:22:00.000+01:002008-09-01T09:22:00.000+01:00Soulful....I catch words haphazardlySoulful....<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/09/i-catch-words-haphazardly.html" REL="nofollow">I catch words haphazardly</A>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-49408275436750628342008-09-01T09:03:00.000+01:002008-09-01T09:03:00.000+01:00Beautiful and haunting. And to see and hear a Robi...Beautiful and haunting. And to see and hear a Robin is truly magical. You describe the time perfectly.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-50635918549870365432008-09-01T08:07:00.000+01:002008-09-01T08:07:00.000+01:00Lovely poem. The robin makes quite a sound for a s...Lovely poem. The robin makes quite a sound for a small bird. The wren is the same! Like your blog BTW.Maggie Mayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06183886005936250976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-25148900595824312222008-09-01T00:49:00.000+01:002008-09-01T00:49:00.000+01:00powerful images indeed.here we are enjoying our la...powerful images indeed.<BR/>here we are enjoying our last days of riped summer and that crazy robin has to announce winter (I was thinking at my age too)Anahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06611955404994410354noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-379163486102448892008-08-31T18:32:00.000+01:002008-08-31T18:32:00.000+01:00Powerful melancholy lines Juliet.Here our robins f...Powerful melancholy lines Juliet.<BR/>Here our robins fly south for the winter - seeing one in March is a harbinger of Spring's arrival. Also our female is a very dull colour compared to the striking male.<BR/>Beautiful write.Janice Thomsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02506920585319893814noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-32530717229533226032008-08-31T18:28:00.000+01:002008-08-31T18:28:00.000+01:00I like this poem. You are quite right - his song...I like this poem. You are quite right - his song is uplifting in Winter but this time of year, when only the robin is singing the is a sad quality - Summer is over and things are dying back.The Weaver of Grasshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13947971556343746883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-13821512743868315622008-08-31T18:05:00.000+01:002008-08-31T18:05:00.000+01:00strikingly beautiful and yes, haunting.strikingly beautiful and yes, haunting.polonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12631341810150848122noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-66864482081607164652008-08-31T17:50:00.000+01:002008-08-31T17:50:00.000+01:00I concur with Lucy. This feels haunting to me. You...I concur with Lucy. This feels haunting to me. You did well with your inspiration (the line from Yang Lian's poem).<BR/><BR/>-NicoleRaven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-15095038002193913322008-08-31T13:50:00.000+01:002008-08-31T13:50:00.000+01:00That's so lovely and soulful!I've often thought th...That's so lovely and soulful!<BR/><BR/>I've often thought that midwinter song is the real reason why they're Christmas birds.Lucyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09764296105901909328noreply@blogger.com