tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post115316091597332211..comments2024-03-28T10:05:36.756+00:00Comments on Crafty Green Poet: Urban haikuCrafty Green Poethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1153492119250121952006-07-21T15:28:00.000+01:002006-07-21T15:28:00.000+01:00Hi, thanks for all your comments!Hi, thanks for all your comments!Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1153303990843390932006-07-19T11:13:00.000+01:002006-07-19T11:13:00.000+01:00"Clouds reflect on chrome"Loving it!Marco"Clouds reflect on chrome"<BR/><BR/>Loving it!<BR/><BR/>MarcoMarchttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06287047415872871270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1153300681385508682006-07-19T10:18:00.000+01:002006-07-19T10:18:00.000+01:00great haiku. i like the implication in the first t...great haiku. <BR/><BR/>i like the implication in the first that with high rise skyline, you only notice the clouds by looking down. reminds of that bit in Dickens - not sure if it's O. Twist or what - where the protagonist is scared stiff by the sight of the enormous sky the first time he is taken outside of the city.Ian russellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11106519805045337505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1153273393990904092006-07-19T02:43:00.000+01:002006-07-19T02:43:00.000+01:00I particularly like the third haiku in this series...I particularly like the third haiku in this series which beautifully captures the feel of a city neighborhood with its music and laughter to "enliven" the city streets.Beccahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14623887166087444590noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1153228556274820462006-07-18T14:15:00.000+01:002006-07-18T14:15:00.000+01:00All 3 were wonderful. The second was my favorite....All 3 were wonderful. The second was my favorite.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1153193943947538602006-07-18T04:39:00.000+01:002006-07-18T04:39:00.000+01:00Great haiku and I agree that it's great that you c...Great haiku and I agree that it's great that you captured a bit of "urban nature" too!Jodihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10128966776368179139noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1153183975702016752006-07-18T01:52:00.000+01:002006-07-18T01:52:00.000+01:00love these, great contrastslove these, great contrastsJennifer S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/04095295914294471508noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1153179830467838242006-07-18T00:43:00.000+01:002006-07-18T00:43:00.000+01:00There's really a lot of nature in the city - I, to...There's really a lot of nature in the city - I, too, love the bird singing among the rubble.Catherinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08236329216260906624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1153176799226355702006-07-17T23:53:00.000+01:002006-07-17T23:53:00.000+01:00Great city "feel" to your haiku! Love that the bir...Great city "feel" to your haiku! Love that the bird is noticed.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16542790.post-1153167561565330892006-07-17T21:19:00.000+01:002006-07-17T21:19:00.000+01:00What treats :) That second one was brilliant! I lo...What treats :) That second one was brilliant! I love how the bird singing makes everything feel better.Tammy Brierlyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14673290512175050093noreply@blogger.com